A first learn but i guess an alright starter.
well
it wasnt exactly smooth, but my first wasnt any better.
Its just it was suddenly getting faster at the start, then it jumped to a louder tune, then some other stuff happened and someones voice came over.
Just a bit random, thats all.
You still did a good job.
7/10
-xXSnowBladeXx
Not coherent...
It sounded like you wanted to put too much different things in the song. They don't sound too wel together. Try letting your different pieces of music blend in eachother.
Though the designated driver thingy was cool :-P
4/10
2/5
Peace
yeah, thanks for the review. as you make it. it seems to sound better and then when you listen to it after it's made it feels like you didn't make it like that. But i understand what you mean.
it was my first song and i wanted a tecno song with comedy haha.
ill try better next time.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
777overload 
