Good job dude.
Work on your EQing a bit, and normalise your track (for loudness). The snare sounded a bit flat, it needs some high.
Otherwise, I like
The song was quiet calm, the melody was nice
Did the "turn up speakers".Was okay, took forever to get the main part of song and get out of intro though. Fix that record sound problem and add some stuff here and there and you got yourself a song.