Pretty Good Start
This isn't bad. You could definitely get something great out of this. Maybe make the second layers, they one that kicks in at 0:08 less muddy, and perhaps speed up the tempo. Then just make it longer, and you might just have front page material.
front page would be nice.... hopefully one day haha thanks for the review!
pretty good but
i think the tune needs to change up and mabey add a quitar riff or two or possibly add siren sound in the begining or war sonuds or start with a symphany
i wish i still had the file for this song, cuz then i could make those changes, but the final product was pretty similar to this :/
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.