Its ok ..
i expected more from the melody !! like a changeup or something
I would work on the drums more !!
they are a bit loud and the kick is very muddy
Ambience is Very clean tho !!
just rework them Drums !! then you got a good mix
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The full Ep is on my Soundcloud.
shlowmo responds:
Thanks for your comment! yeah I could've added more to the drums.
I just got back on Newgrounds to look around and I really wasn't expecting much from the Audio tab but I really do think you've got some talent here man. I wasn't feeling it much in the beginning but in the second half, I felt the air from my fan and let the song just play and it's a very nice, very soothing and low tone song. I wouldn't be surprised to see this in a Lofi compilation if I'm being honest. I really think you should keep putting out music and that you should stay motivated. You've got some talent, I also enjoy the 16D audio you put in there with the synths. Good job!
shlowmo responds:
Thank you so much! your comment means a lot. I've been lurking for a while and saw that Newgrounds has a lot of different and cool music producers and just thought about posting here too.
There's lots of good elements here, but it feels like the upbeat parts die off too soon to really get into it. I like the water droplet sound quite a lot.
shlowmo responds:
Thanks a lot. One of the things I try to do is not to extend the song to much to where it gets boring. I'm still trying to find the balance with things
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