Nifty Tune

So this here was a nifty tune you have here some nice "BEAT" too for the "FOURTY-NINE-SECONDS" that this does go on, so on that reflection of things It could be longer more twists in the beat but for sure longer, the tune is nice though and some decent vibe in there.

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It could be longer more twists in the beat but for sure longer

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hmmm

This is interesting. However I feel the drum beat is a bit off. 5/10

what were you thinking?

This is just wild noise... it's very annoying...

Awful.

That was crap. Seriously. Your "bass drum" rhythm sounded like a tiny little 8-bit horse galloping across a screen. And it sounded more like perpetual noise than a "decent loop," as you put it. This is awful. It's not even music. Go fix it.

i dont' know why, but for some reason

when i heard your "song" i suddenly thought of a line from a pokemon game:
"Wild Pidgey wants to fight" [or something like that]