I think it would be beneficial for you to add to the description what your thought process was going into creating and releasing this song. That way i can judge based on how well I thought your intent came across instead of simply my own opinion.
I think this has a very video-game-ish vibe to it, like I'd hear this while playing Super Meatboy. I quite like it. :) Unfortunately, I can't give feedback that meets my review standards (see link below) without the information stated above.
More info about how I review music here: https://codefreq.newgrounds.com/news/post/1089806