love the end my subwofffer was going off the frizs
you have potential
I like some of the effects you used, yet some of them, not so much, especially the offbeat drum at 1:20 or so.
The main synth instrument gets boring after a while, it needs to change up at some point to add variety to the song, and you shouldnt have more than one portion of the song where only that instrument is playing, you must keep the song busier, though not to busy. Just enough to hold peoples attention, another thing, is it almost sound as if you are having different insturments in different keys (aka bass).
Good luck though. voted fourfen