this feels like some oldschool Camellia full flavor and im all for it

love at 1:50 drums, buuut still too much repeat elements.

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This is the start to a good idea. The bass gets a little bit repetitious, and it kind of drowns out all of the other melodic elements in the mix. The transition at 1:50, too, is very sudden and the change in overall volume doesn't feel justified. But, the drums that come in about 20 seconds later are fun, and I liked that.

I'm not against loud songs, I love a good noisy song, but I think this song could do well to manage the variation in loudness between elements to make sure everything fits in the mix right. Like at the end, I just straight up cannot hear the lead at all.

So, it's not bad, but it could use some work to really hit the mark.

This made me laugh...and my head hurt...