What a great sound i Fkn like it!

I listened an half hour song so that isn't really a challenge :)
can I use your song for a video pls, I'll give you the credits for the song

creative criticism

this is good. however, like an essay, it waffles a bit. there's some really good stuff, in here, so if you cut the repeptitive, samey bits that aren't really necessary you could have a really great song only lasting about 6 or 7 minutes.
keep it up man, and remember- its not the amount, its the content.
rock on.

repetative

I agree with OneWhoListens, this song is far to repetative, you should have only make this a one minute song or two minute.

Other then that the basic melody is good, your just over useing a good thing

-Zermanl

Not worthy of eleven minutes.

It was good, at least at the beginning, but changing instruments around in the same basic pattern does not make for good music. It got boring really fast. It would have made an excellent two minute song.