this is good. however, like an essay, it waffles a bit. there's some really good stuff, in here, so if you cut the repeptitive, samey bits that aren't really necessary you could have a really great song only lasting about 6 or 7 minutes.
keep it up man, and remember- its not the amount, its the content.
The idea was to get something going from A to G#, in 32 measures per key. I should probably make the melodies more intricate and with more variation.
I agree with OneWhoListens, this song is far to repetative, you should have only make this a one minute song or two minute.
Other then that the basic melody is good, your just over useing a good thing
Not worthy of eleven minutes.
It was good, at least at the beginning, but changing instruments around in the same basic pattern does not make for good music. It got boring really fast. It would have made an excellent two minute song.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.