Interesting.... I like it. :P
a little repetitive at times, mostly due to just using bass patterns over and over again, which can be easily remedied by having the pattern change keys or even just octaves. the beginning of this song is good (about the first minute) Then the second minute is repetitive, but thankfully the piano comes in and does some VERY nice things. at 2:30ish things come back together, and it all flows nicely. Good solid beat the whole time.
But after that, again, it just does the same thing untill it ends, and speaking of the end, it's KILLING me. I want it to do something else so much more, but it just kind of stops, and then has that one note. I see what you're kind of going for, but keep in mind if you have something in like, the last two seconds of a song, it's going to be RIGHT before whatever the next song played is, which could it itself if it loops, and it doesn't sound like what you probably want.
just a few arrangement suggestions, other than that a very good song. I'm not sold on the title though, it doesn't really fit the style.
Something that should be on Metroid, or some other sci-fi video game :)
Wonderful use of crunchy, lo-fi synths in a non-chiptune composition. I enjoy it.
sweet ( i wolud have it on my mp4)
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