To the brick wall
Your music could probly use some equalising, although it might be the fact theres a brick wall standing inbetween me and the sound comming out :p
Nice lyrics / effects on them, though about halfway though the song it starts breaking up the lyrics a little too much. Keep up the submissions !
Yeah, I couldn't agree with you more. The original version of this song was even worse (for a contest using only a pre-defined set of samples), I beefed up the bass (which was originally pretty thin), did SOME EQ, and a lot of compression. the effect was light-years better, but still a bit muddled and drowning vox near the end. 7/10 is more than kind there :)
i do think "heaven" came out the best, mix-wise, even though I think the vocals are trite ;) "overflow" is a bit bass heavy, but still way better mix-wise, also.
thanks for the listen