Time flies a lot when I listen to this piece on loop. I forget it's there. It's almost a minute long, but feels like different lengths depending on how much I'm paying attention.
I think the mix could use some compression/limiting plugins, and/or normalization to boos the volume. It's a little quiet as it is right now.
I'm curious: What were you trying to accomplish by making this? I'd love to give this a proper review by judging how effective your intent comes across rather than simply by my own personal taste.
I hope you find this useful. :)
More info about how I review music here: https://codefreq.newgrounds.com/news/post/1089806