When I see the title, I think of dread. I don't feel dread when I hear this song. In terms of getting that feeling across, I don't think it effectively communicates it. It's an early attempt, so I'll give it the benefit of the doubt.
I wish you had more information in the description about your creative process; what you were thinking when creating this piece and its title. That way I can give a more accurate review that isn't just based off my personal taste but is also based on how clear your intent came across.
Personally, I like this song. The writing style reminds me of some of my early work, before I created my current NG account, which is also why I'd like to know how you made this song.
I hope you find this helpful. :)
More info about how I review music here: https://codefreq.newgrounds.com/news/post/1089806