Pretty good :)

The song is pretty descent, I think your songs lack drums, which I found a nifty we program called "Rhythm Rascal" if you type that into google you can download it and use the drum feature to make kick ass beats. Also I think what you should do when recording is put your mic in front of your amp so it's only picking up the sound output from that instead of picking up other noises like pick scraping etc
But over all, nice job :)

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