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I worked very hard on this one and it took me a lot of hours to get it just right. It's not perfect, but practice makes perfect.


Picture Link: https://www.wallpapermaiden.com/wallpaper/10381/anime-girl-walking-scenic-sky/download/2560x1440

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The droning pad in the background is a bit annoying, might wanna change the progression sometime, pal. Otherwise, this is pretty good.

Sounds like a menu for a wii app

I like it a lot it is really nice and calming

jojojeux responds:

Thank you!

yes

jojojeux responds:

maybe

If the picture in the link you posted is in any way representative of the music, I think the shoe fits well. It's so beautiful!

I think what would make the music fit the picture better is if it was less busy, maybe removing the percussion or at least scaling it back. When I look at the picture and listen to the music, I see the same sky but with an inner-city skyline rather than a field horizon.

That said, I'm just guessing that the picture is a visual representation of the music. The reality is, the info you presented in the description of this piece, the title, the genre and tags, none of that is enough for me to see what you are trying to get across with this piece. If you were to add some clearer info that says what your thought process was in creating this piece, I'd get a better understanding and my score could change as a result.

Technically speaking, I think the volume could be raised with some light compression and/or limiting, possibly normalizing as well.

I hope you find my feedback helpful. :)

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jojojeux responds:

I don't really ever bother with stuff like explaining the genres since I'm a multi-genre composer, but I decided to change the picture to the previous one I had in mind since it seems to be more fitting.

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jojojeux
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Listens
242
Faves:
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Downloads
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Votes
10
Score
4.42 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 11, 2020
2:52 PM EDT
Genre
Ambient
File Info
Song
6.6 MB
2 min 53 sec

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