UPDATE:

I see you've added a description. Much appreciated. :)

In terms of the Childish Dream vibe, I think it comes across strongest in the beginning with the children sound effects. That's not to say the rest of it is bad, by any means. I think the message is still slightly unclear at times, although it's hard to criticize mode of expression. I'll give it the benefit of the doubt and give it 5 stars.

It's a unique take on a dreamy sound, combining trap beats with drops and ambient music. It's well mixed.

Nice work. :)

My previous 4 star review:

"A piece like this would really benefit from a proper description of your thought process while making this song. Otherwise, I have to judge it by my personal taste rather than how effective I think your message comes across.

That said, as it is, I like it a lot. :)

More info about how I review music here: https://codefreq.newgrounds.com/news/post/1089806"