i loved it

yo do u guys got a myspace

Lets see

sorry guys, but i wasn't too thrilled with this song. this doesn't mean i'm saying you guys suck. so lets take a look at the song for a sec.

Bad: I recommend that you spend a bit more time mixing the voices. It was pretty difficult to make out the words. There just wasn't enough clarity. The only other complaint is that there was a bit too much dialog in the song.

Good: Great idea! Who writes about huffing paint? Very original idea. I also really liked the fact that you didn't loop your music track. Also, the fact that there was a guitar solo added to the song quite a bit. Not that it hasn't been done before. I just happen to appreciate it when rap isn't so "cookie cutter". Finally, you flowed really well.

All in all, I'd say this was a good song. Take a bit more time mixing the vocal tracks and you got a hit.

Woo!

Love it, great sounds and a great ambient beat/rythem in the background. Perfect in every way. Good lyrics, good voice, good tune. Keep it up!!

-cd-

eh alright

It was ok just seems like another raper nothing special.

It was pretty good

By far it was the best rap song I have ever heard but it still didn't absolutely impress me.