the bass was weak
Well organized and composed, but in the future try to incorporate some mix of sounds(edit/create unique?) , and not play the cathode loop over and over. ++bass dub would do wonders for the chorus... Kicks alone dont define the "Bass" in DnB. Drums Lead, Bass push.
Ya... I totaly screwed up by mastering at my friends house with the sub on.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.