Uh....Wow...
Can't say I like it, at all. Although it is....interesting. I will say nice job on coming up with a video game tune. This would be perfect in all those old school original Nintendo games.
There is one sound in it that reminds me of the sound that Mario makes when he goes into a tube on the original Mario Bros. Maybe I'm an idiot, idk. But yea, other than that I really didn't dig this. Sorry. Maybe use some different sounds in it, to give it a little...balance? Yea, that might be the word I'm looking for, but I'm not sure. I'll give ya a 2/5 and 3/10.
Hope this didn't seem like a hate-fest of a review. I didn't intend it to be, if you took it that way. :-/
-Gravey-