I know you want to make the lyrics stand out...
but if you made the piano a lil louder it would be delightful. love the lyrics though. 9/10 <3
wow, it sounds like a free style... but im sure its not, and even if... it still sucks, bad.
Eh.. How did it get a high score..?
Well.. im sorry that i have to say this, but you really cant sing..
Even if you dont have the voice, all these things you said was like a whole sentence whitout a comma or a dot...
I really wonder HOW did you get a highscore?
And yes, i CAN sing better then you..
Hmmm... maybe other peops liked it ? Thank to the creator, not all people think like you. Ever thought about the fact that punctuation would weaken the song ? The purpose is to show a thought process. At the end it gets punctuation, when the thoughts clear into suicide. How can one claim to sing better/worse then someone else ? You find that someone sings good/bad in your PERSONAL opinion and same with comparing singers. Unless you want to compare Avril Lavigne live with Freddie Mercury live. I think there would be a CLEAR difference.
My ears...they bleed...tvym -.-
skinny/fat they all rejoice when they are...DAD i hope you meant dead...cuz that would be creepy...
Hey. Good Job that you actually listened to the lyrics and made it that far listening to it. It must have been such a creepy experience. Just another bash. No real suggestion for improvement.
Cool how you took a song that was not meant to be Hip Hop and evolved it into something more deep by a mix of hip-hop r'n'b and goth. The song is powerful and deep. Shows a lot of emotion. That is the way a goth song should be. dark, gloomy, sad with a wish of death. I think you hit the nerve of our generation. That is why I give you 10 Stars. One of the better, more deep, songs I have heard on this portal.
Thank you for this uplifting review. I am flattered.