the clap got really annoying. you should try to find better samples. also this is really repetitive, most other remixes of this are 2-3 minutes, 4:57 is totally unnecessary. you really don't do anything to mix it up, just that same melody over and over, for wayyy too long. try adding your own melody or something to mix things u, or at least make it a few minutes shorter. also i'd try to mess with sytrus more, i can pick out all of the presets you've used. also, i noticed an absence of a hi hat, and snare rolls. the main problem is it's just really boring. don't worry too much, just do your best to improve and i'm sure you'll get there man.
instruments are nice
melody is ok, but a litl (too) repeating
drums are kinda basic :(
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