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HipHop Experimental


Author Comments

I found a half finished song from years ago in one of my song folders. I decied to do the last little bit of work to finish it just so it woulnd't be "just another unfinished song to add to the list".

Can you help me?

I've been struggling making progress with music lately so I'd really adpriciate some feedback project.

Is it any good?

What do you not like?

What do you like?

What should I focus on in future project to make them better?

What can you hear that I obviously can? (I need perspective)

P.S: I didn't know what genre to put this under so if anybody can help me label this genre it would be great.

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Not bad; I enjoyed this if I'm being honest with you.
But now, I'm going to answer your five questions in the description:

Is it any good? - Yes, it's good enough to listen to, and it's good enough to be a backdrop (besides the words in it).

What do you not like? - Well, there's not much I don't like, but I'll tell you that the bits in 1:21-1:26, 2:48-2:53, and 4:15-4:20 are very empty compared to the rest of the song, and the transitions to them AND away from them are unexpected, and you want a smooth transition from one bit to another, but in this case, it's not a big deal, like at all; I'm sure people can deal with it.

What do you like? - I like that it is early hip-hop, I like the slap bass, I like how you add rock elements into it, I just like how you structured this track.

What should I focus on in future projects to make them better? - I think you should work on your transitions, smooth transitions make your tracks better. And put a bit of ear candy in it for extra flavor.

What can you hear that I obviously can? (I need perspective) - I can hear the theremin, I can hear the backup guitars, I can hear the power chord guitars, and I can hear those little vocal shots, too! There's more I can hear, but let's not worry.

Overall, I'm giving five stars aside from the little transitions. Nice job! :)

Credits & Info


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Feb 19, 2020
1:28 PM EST
File Info
13.5 MB
5 min 53 sec

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