Not half bad
This was actually a decent little song, although it's not really my thing I liked the way it was put together.
Few things I wanted to point out though, first... and this one counts! Tune your guitar properly before you record anything! Especially some bits ended up a bit dodgy as a result. Also keep practicing on your singing, and finally... from where you turn on your overdrive/distortion on the guitar... it becomes very blurry so try recording that bit separately so you can make it come out better in the end.
Hope you take these things to hart cause you're well underway already :)