This... is a mess
Allright, this song is a mess of sh*t, I think I heard a basemelody and I think I heard something that sorta sounded like a solo but that was about all I could make out from this one.
I realize that this is a preview, and I heard some nice combinations in here, but it's not a whole, it sounds like you made some cool bits and chucked them together which, in my opinion, isn't what music is about.
Keep trying though, if you like this sorta thing keep working on it and improving it, let other people (if they know music, and that's a big IF :P) listen to your song and give you criticism as well. Oh and please drop me a line the next time you release something, I'm curious to see where you intend on taking things.