There's a lot of good sounds in this but i think the mix production could use some work. There's a lot of sounds contesting for the spotlight it seems to me, like the synth chords sound a bit too hot and the distorted bass kind of triumphs over everything else that you can't really take in the melody as nicely. In short it's a mess, but i think with some gain reduction, and eq it could benefit this greatly. Unless i'm totally missing the point and this is the intended style, and my ears need some gain reduction and eq who knows
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