ok while this was not exactly what i normally listen too i still found this one to be kind of interesting, it was different though, but i really like it and it can be even better if you ask me. OK so this was different but this was kinda neat there could be some work done with a more clear sound effect in there, but i think you have it down for the mostpart, the guitar was pretty good aswell. I like different and unique stuff like this one and you really went for the different, so thats what kept me interested here in this one, so as i end this review keep up the interesting creativity.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here in this little area is where i try and make some helpfull suggestions, i believe you had this down for the mostpart but i have some other options aswell, not much but here you go. Some more training of the voice might help to improve on this but you really have it down, and its just a matter of time before you really get it down.