Nice. :)

Liking the upbeat melody near the middle of the piece.

the beginnning was sweet, but i dont like the rest

yeah, i did not like any of those gay angelic synths/pads you introduced after the first few seconds, it just sounded retarded after the beginning. however, the intro could have stood as a base for a really sweet track imo. sorry for being too critical :P
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Retro

Made me think of the 16bit days.

Could make nice credits music.

I just wish it was a more memorable melody.

Cool

It's pretty good.. Not as much feeling as I'm use to, but it's defiantly worth a 7.
It's good though, maybe if you added a little more sounds and such it may be better, but what do I know..

I do love my computer

I Do so love my comp.
But how might this be used in a video or game?