This is more like it.
Fuch' yea. This is the bong'. Much better than that pussy out fall out boy kid.
(Actually I take that back)
Good Main riff (For verses)
Lyrics are lame *crying bitch*.
' When you say: Here, you sound really queer, so. Watch out'.
Listen to old school grunge music, example; Pearl Jam. Nine inch nails. take note of their voices, tone and lyrics.
(GOOD LYRICS ARE BANDS THAT DON'T SING ABOUT THEMSELVES) - People now days wanna hear shit about themselves, stop bitching about your self, screw writting songs about your friends, start writing about places, goverment.
But don't pay any attention to me, I'm a basted when it comes to music.