Well in the middle of the song, it sounded like too much was going on there. However, there were some good sounds, but it seemed like the bad ones were destroying the song. Keep improving, and you'll get there. :P
oddly, there are very few basic sound elements in this song - but heavy processing was done on all of the audio tracks. it is supposed to be a very mechanical, chaotic, reverb mess - in a classical industrial style (not that dancy or cok-like "industrial" played these days). It is a bit mudded and sounds do drown each other out more than i would like, however, I will buy that :) Thanks tho.