muddy and too quiet
i like the arrangement of what i could actually hear of it. you need some punch in the drums and more mid to upper end sounds. right now with everything on the low end i hear a lot of rumbling and faint drums and sounds and a LOT of static. MAKE IT LOUD next time, even if muddy, at least you'll get points for assulting peoples aural senses ;)
Lacking in sound quality
At best, the music sounds like it has static. I feel the distortion is poor or something, not to mention the many repetitions of odd keyboard lines.
I would suggest submitting a clearer version, and try to mix up the sounds sometime in your song.