lol at the beginning fm synth. it almost sounds like the beginning was inspired by the song have a seizure. but still pretty awesome.
a bit too repetetive. the beginning sort of turned be off, because it was too loud, and you could've picked better voices for both the kick and the bass. but once the more techno things came in, it got more fun to listen to. the lead that came in at :52 annoyed me so much, because I kept expecting it to go up or down, and start some kind of actual chord progression. alas, it just did what it did and left, and then some more interesting trance things happened. the break at 1:28 is good, but again, the pattern goes nowhere.
the outro was much better. and this had some good beat and trance style ideas, but as far as the actual melody.... *cough*
hurry the hell up and put the rest of ur cd on this shit