This one was very upbeat and has some nice vibe along with it onlything here is that its very very short and I can see you making this into more of a song with it being longer so make it longer and with more sounds here and there and its solid stuff.
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Make it longer more like a song.
The music is great. Lots of variety and instruments. Looking forward to the finished version!
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