The only things I can find that doesn't work for me is this little sound effect you stuck in, don't know how to describe it, and when you just go to solo drums in the middle, maybe it could use a LITTLE something to make it not so static.
You should do a remix of this with not so many drums so it's tottaly ambiant. That would be like "the car song when it's a dark stary night and the road is tottaly straight and you can see the horisain and your in a dessert and your going to las vagas". That would be cool. I like ambiance. I like cupcakes. spoons are cool.