This song is rather mediocre. I do wish that it had more contour (as in, builds and drops and things like that), but it sounds alright as it is right now. I will agree with TheGoldenProof with the fact that this needs more variations in melody. However, the instruments sound very good, and I do like the percussion! You have potential!

Gonna be honest, I didn't listen to the whole song. It seemed like 3 minutes of the same 4 bar loop, just sometimes... louder. If the leading sounds maybe did something else, like changed to a different melody or something, it would be much better.