it has everything that a good trance song should have but...i don't know...they dont seem to fit together correctly...
wish i could be more helpful
Good ideas but needs some work
It's a nice song, however you might want to try to use a little less reverb at parts. It can become overwhelming. It's also quite repetitive but that is the genre you're working in. I like some of your ideas and melodies, although a little over used, what isn't in the music industry these days? Keep it up.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.