Nice

Really good tone, nice melody, you did the right things in this song

oh teh noes!!

where's the rest??? ack!! It was too good to have such a short ending! please tell me you're continuing the song? please? *does puppy eyes*

Good otherwise!

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the beginning sounded like it was recorded in a crappy mike but it got better.. a little..

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PLAY AROUND MORE I WANT MORES!!!

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=O
meh nice melodie

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lol