The hats first at 0:17

They didnt mix lol.
Open to closed much to quick.
Good work!

Good job on the melodies. Strong mood. 7.5/10

While the overall flow of the piece is a bit flat, the structure is solid, and the melodies are nice. Good job on the piano melody; I like it, although there's something wrong with the bit that plays at 0:10 where it goes high (and every subsequent time that melody is used, of course). I'm not too fond of the synth lead, but the melody is good (although it doesn't quite work against the piano all the time). It could have used a few more flourishes. I'm thinking high notes. Then again, I have a tendency to find little things to add to other people's songs. The flourishes you had were nice. I liked the really fast string of notes at 1:01 or so. 16th note triplets? The beat is constant and driving throughout. It could use a better kick sample, and that hats are on the loud side. Overall, though, this is a neat song. Good job. Oh, where's that final note? I love that decelerando at the end, but I feel there should be one more note tagged onto the end. I'm too lazy to find out what note exactly it is, but it's the same note that starts the song. Oh well, good job. Later!

Great job yet again!

Somthing that got me thinking was this song is way to repetitive.. or am I listening to it wrong... anyways great work!

awsome

IM going to Make FMV5 with this if you dont mind

nice song feel

Nice one!
The song itself could get a big "10" but ..damn..the sound quality is not perfect!
(for example the "Release" time of the piano samples)