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Probably my best mixing, most of the time spent making this thing was the mixing.

I'm surprised how well this song went in terms of mixing, it was super fun to make and I'm happy how it turned out!

Honest ratings appreciated.

Samples: Futuristic Sample Pack, Lazerblade sample collection, and Real Drums Vol. 1.

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TBH the guy below me is right, this song is EXTREMLY boring, sorry dude...

Honestly, where do I even start...

The drums are extremely over compressed, they take up most of the volume of the song, which is never a good thing. The synths are too quiet, I can barely hear them over the drums.

This is also very repetitive. People generally get tired of something after hearing it 5-8 times, add more parts to your songs structure. It will help a LOT.

In my opinion, every song needs to tell some kind of story. Even if that isn't your intent. It needs a story because the songs that don't have one are... well... boring. Vocals help a LOT, but if you cant use them then try and uses song structure. Like I previously talked about.

The transitions are rough and more FX are needed, you seem to already understand transitions pretty well though... So I wont get into that much.

Lastly, I just wanted to point out that you are being just as toxic and defensive as the guy below, and he is PRETTY fuckin toxic. Music producing requires self control and experience (of which you will gain overtime). Use your self control and don't get into fights like I did. It will make people HATE you as they hate me.

Hope this helped you a bit...


Turret1234 responds:

I'm not going to get hateful/defensive on this one, that other guy was very very bitter, and didn't even attempt to give a fair rating. Your review actually has depth to it unlike his, that's why I got defensive.

I wasn't really going for a super storied vibe for this song, I'm heavily inspired by artists which generally are repetitive, which can be seen as boring. I still think it's a problem that my music is repetitive.

I also generally don't like using FX, maybe I should use FX more often, I'll take it into consideration.

The synths are kinda quiet looking back, but I need to generally fix up my mixing, this is my best mixing as of now but I need to work on pretty much everything.

I also don't exactly know what you mean by "story." I've tried different, less conventional structures before, and even this has a pretty unconventional structure. But it mostly ends up turning pretty bad.

Thanks for the tips though, will keep them in mind in the future!

Credits & Info


1.98 / 5.00

Jan 11, 2020
9:13 PM EST
Drum N Bass
File Info
3.3 MB
2 min 1 sec
  • LMMS

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