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Aug 2, 2007 | 8:09 PM EDT
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2.9 MB
3 min 8 sec
3.39 / 5.00

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Rated 3.39 / 5 stars
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Electronic - Ambient

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Dark sounding. Don't know what to do with it. Atmospheric.



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Could use some alterations

The constant motion of the string/pad thing when it is louder doesn't work as well as it should. The chord that comes on the fourth beat should come again as a whole note in the next bar. And loop it that way, until you want it to be more energetic, then switch to the constant motion thing. It would be part of a rather slower development, though. Pretty large change. I would also say some reverb would up the sort of creepy vibe.

Of course, this is the way I would write this piece, not the way you would. Just my ideas on it. Overall, good ideas, but the execution is not yet good enough to consummate them.

Valtrix responds:

Thanks so much for the review! I've been waiting for somebody to comment on some of my music. See, I try to do as best as I can, but as it is I'm pretty new with making things, so I need some help still. However, I don't have a lot of musical friends, so it's hard to do that.

I think I know what you mean about the pad. It doesn't quite work how I wanted it to, but I wasn't exactly sure what to do with it. It probably does need a little slower development like you mentioned, with holding a note, and I think I know where you're talking about. Not sure how to use reverb right now, but that's something I'll definitely be looking into!