definitely good sounding but.... something is missing here, some sense of incompleteness, and its about not only sounding but specially about composition.
sound looks like too easy, oh man, i rlly dont know what wrong but iam frustrating
about composition structure - it can be good for cinematic style, for some king of show, may be too long pauses for easy listening
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.