dayyuum son! this is some real smooth stuff.
but i held back a half a star due to the way you ended the song. on a track this smooth, you can't just cut it of like you hit a brick wall. you gotta end it with a little flare. something that leaves the listener with a good feeling in the heart and a smile on the face.
the way it is now, the listener has the good feeling, but when the song ends, they are thinking "wait, that's it?". the way you end a song is just as important as the beginning and the middle.

Very cool melody. But for this mellow melody the snare is too heavy beating. I would think to find some other approach to drums.

nice chill groove