Disappointing finish...
AH! I was so stoked with this track right after the intro and then it just died in its repetitiveness...
the change of pace really gave it life and the song really took off after 25 seconds and jumped into overdrive. I was jamming to this then the silent gap and the second section started and i was like yeah, because the background complexity carried the redundant warble but it died somewhere after 2 min 5 seconds and after that it just dragged out...
then ending was a nice touch with the decomposition and removal of instruments however it wasn't enough to re engage me as a listener. i just felt lost in part that felt like you didn't know what to do after 2 mins and 20 seconds until you decided to just end it.
Keep working at it i am sure you will be able to clean up your technique and do well. i am looking forward to more music from you.