I think it is very close.
The Piano or the supersound, which is going to win? Both were working to keep my attention, as with the first version, the high sound and the piano need to be defined more clearly - the clapping 'drum' sound was nearly lost. I'd say, tone down the piano a bit, and strech the highsound to 1/2 the beat count. A try for me?
Great stuff though, another piece to put on repeat to sleep to and think about.