at least it wasn't boring.
I gotta give you props for not making one huge ass loop. A bit random, but definitly shows some skill.
a bit strange
i have to say it does at times seem kind of random. mabye you could focus on one of the loops, and build on it.
Too all over the place
I'm going to admit that I only listened to the first minute and a half or so, then skipped along through the rest of the song, so my apologies if the ending is a masterpiece. Now, from what I did listen to, the song's main problem was that its simply too all-over-the-place. It sounded like a collection of loops, one after the other, that didn't necessarily compliment the other loops. Oh, and that cowbell is too loud.