The growls in this one are better, but you need to sidechain the first part lol. The kicks and snares are interfering with the growls. You can sidechain it by sending everything except the drums to a sidechain channel (just a regular mixer channel) and automate it so that whenever the kick hits, everything else's volume goes quiet for a split second. It really helps. The mixing is also subpar. Cut out the mids in alot of the growls and boost the highs in some.

good

omg it amazing!!!

I like the idea of ​​the track, but the mix failed.
But you still have ahead, I believe you will become a skill producer :)