i heard this and i wanted to kill myself...........no offense just.......just keep practicing...........(breaks speakers)
Sorry to say, but this was just painful to my ear. Less beeps would help...
the first synth is just flat out annoying, sounds like ur in some bizzare carnival or something fcked like that. the second one that comes in [i assume an electric guitar-ish thing or something] is way too distorted and harsh to do anyting but hurt =[ the beat was stale, just a bass drum and a stereotypical clap. idk i just didnt like this, sorry. though one good thing was the little strums and then the really high off-key synth, it actualyl sounded okay the first few times.
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