Been checking out most of your work.
It's all got awesome beats!
Yeah, i agree that the vocals drag this track down.
KICKASS Melody though!
sorry to say
it a badass melody but the vocals really ruin it mayb u can do a remix with out the vocals it would probably be better
sorry to say i really hate it, it's a novel idea, but to me it seems to have very little in the line of melody there at all, ad i don't thinkj the lyrics are helpful. Sorry!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.