Nice. really nice. I don't know if this is intentional but the thin/muffled tone works.
There are some issues with cross phase, and it really hampers the vocal.
The licks are great, drums are great, the vocal style is great. I really think you need a good producer and studio technician. For all the promise in a track I like immensely, you are doing yourself no favours with the current recordings.
Please PM me, if you have the stems to hand I will happily provide a mix, free of charge. Just so you can hear the difference.
Keep up the work making great songs, you have loads of potential and an audience out there who will listen. You need to polish up though.