I like the tone and rhythm of your voice as you're speaking. In my opinion, you could narrate videos and presentations very well. I do think the subject matter was a little scattered and confusing though. You mention the speech is about child abuse but it seems to veer off into evolution and how people think without really explaining how those things relate to the core subject. Overall, good work! Just need to smooth out a few edges.

I like it.

The recording sounds pretty good. I can still pick up some background noise during your speaking but it isn't excessive. As for your speaking I would work a bit on your enunciation; There are a few words you seemed to fumble over, if only slightly.

I'm going to be diving a little on the subjective side now. You should speak up a bit, in most sections you are speaking quite softly, and in others it's almost whispering. There is also very little variance on your inflection, which leads to the speech almost sounding "monotone" in a way.

Edit: Sorry @Belthagor - "Thank you very much for the feedback! I was hoping for feedback on the content as well though. :/"

I am an audio guy and tried to keep focused on that aspect. I'm not a writer so I'm not sure I'd be able to provide adequate criticism on your speech. I'll give it a go,

First off, I agree with the subject matter, that child abuse is bad, I've experienced it, not as bad as others, however. I like the introductory paragraph, and your point with CEOs and submissiveness is interesting. After the intro it falls apart a bit for me.

After a certain point, yes children do in fact know what they are doing, just because they are still developing doesn't mean that they are automatically absolved of breaking the rules. I'm not sure why you mentioned death in that first sentence as well, seemed out of place.

Actually animals, specifically monkeys, have been observed abusing their young, so it's not just a human issue, although it could be localized to hominins. I believe abuse stems from mental issues, which itself can stem from abuse, and it's at least partially, not a conscious choice.

Everything past those initial sentences in your second paragraph really lose focus, and get a little confusing. The next sentence seems to me, to be asking abusers not to have children, which is fair enough I guess. Your next sentence, is about social advancement which doesn't seem to relate to child abuse. This part "...don't know how to think, so they're thinking about it, and making new things... unlike old things which no one thinks about..." is all over the place and very confusing.

The speech ends fine, but I'm mainly left confused and feeling like I didn't learn anything.

Your speech is my awesome. ///-///