Sounds like it's title! I love the warm tones, in contrast to the brightness of the drums. I like the clear separation of tones. Adding that extra 3D element like rain is a nice touch too.
another idea i thought of since its been hard to come up with rhythms recently
Sounds like it's title! I love the warm tones, in contrast to the brightness of the drums. I like the clear separation of tones. Adding that extra 3D element like rain is a nice touch too.
I hear a LOT of potential in this track, mainly because of the synths that you use. The sound design overall is really cool to listen to and keeps me pretty engaged throughout the whole song. However, my biggest concern is the mixing.
First, I think all of the drums can be louder, especially at the parts of the song where the rhythmic synth is playing. The levels of the drums sounds fine any other time, but for some reason that rhythmic synth pattern drowns out a lot of your drums. Second, the rhythmic synth is a bit loud. I like the chord progression you have going on for it, but anytime it isn't playing, there's a pretty big dynamic drop that might throw the listener off. Third, the bass needs to be louder too. I'd recommend layering a sub bass on top of that line you already have for it, maybe even change the line just a tad by bringing the last note of that line (C) down an octave.
I really like all the movement and effects you have going on for that rhythmic synth btw, brings a lot of variety in your song and really engages the listener to hear all its little nuances! I'd recommend maybe adding some other melody lines during the softer parts of the song so that it doesn't feel too empty there, but honestly it'd sound pretty cool either way. Really nice concept overall dude, keep experimenting!!
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